I have added the necessary elements and slightly increased the cabin. It is better not to increase it more. I will be adding lightning color cover.
Regarding lightning instead of "Z". It is better not to change anything else, there is a compositional axis and everything is balanced. Any additions into completed picture, when all balanced and arranged in a certain rhythm usually carries negative.
I would like to send an invoice for work done as we agreed $XXX, ($XX - first sketch, $XX - second sketch, $XX - lightning).
I read the article. It's good. Thanks, Ruslan - Indyfest Interview - Bob Moyer AKA Peeky