The image may look better without text. However, if it does not communicate the point of the story, then the text is needed. I will not make the determination. I will share the works. Also please make a version without the crows text leaving only Dorothy's text so i have a comparison.
On these sketches - I have no idea how many i will want that depends if there is any demand when i do kickstarter. If i do not raise the minimum, then i will not need any. Now I am looking for an individual price (I thought you quoted me early on, but have not had a chance to look)