Jul, 19 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

There is a significant difference in the plastic of Tee's figure and I corrected it. It's important.

I sent the invoice for a working on the characters and today in the evening will send the sketches to the scenes.

Best regards.

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 20 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I attached the sketches to Pile of gizzards and Gorge at Night scenes. I decided not to depict a lot of characters in the Pile of gizzards scene so that to show closer the dog and gizzards. Gorge at Night scene will look spectacular in color. Hope you will like them.

I'm working on a sketch to the next scene.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

 

 

Jul, 20 Peeky

 

Thanks Ruslan, Nice start - comments follow.

Gizzards -

I would like to see a high stack, a triangular stack of gizzards. perhaps Toto pulling one out with his mouth in the middle of this back, and them starting to Tumble. I am sending a link that shows you images of gizzards as the detail when colored will make a difference.

Image of gizzards

Jumberello Night Scene

I would like this to be a horizontal scene and about the heavens and jumberello. This scene takes place with them on a jumberello floating over the gorge with jumberello above, below and outward and the vast star studded universe above - the stars could be the only clue that separate land from sky. I would like it very close to the script as described earlier with characters on a jumberello looking very small against this great canvas of the heavens.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

Peeky

 

Jul, 21 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

Gizzards.

Okay I will do these changes. Please send the image again. It is not attached.

Jumberello Night Scene.

I will do another composition. Since the characters will be very small, I will show their silhouettes.

Are they all on the same Jumberello or on several?

Appearance of Uncle Henry and Aunt Em.

I attached two versions of rough schematic composition to the scene. Since you asked that the aunt and uncle materialize on the land and need to depict faces of the main characters, I can show them in the first variant from the back, and in the second variant from the side. What variant do you choose?

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 21 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I changed the sketch for the Gizzards scene. It is attached. Of course, in the drawing, everything will look more in detail, including the gizzards. Please send the image you mentioned.

I'm also waiting for the answer to the previous message.

 

Thanks,

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 21 Peeky

 

OK, I really would like a higher rectangular mound with most of the mound retaining it shape yet crumbling as he pulls one out in his mouth. perfect otherwise

 

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Peeky

 

 

 

Jul, 21 Peeky

 

Jumberello - I will answer the one about em and henry in a bit.

There are four jumberello - one with william, one with Jim and the manticore, and one with the tin man and one with Dorothy, scrobins, toto, Jack, and tee. You need not show all four jumberello but should show the one with Jack and if showing a second, then the one with Jim and manticore. If you do not show all four then you might want to position these manticor on the canvas so that they are closer to an edge which would reflect the other two just not yet coming into view

 

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Peeky

 

 

 

Jul, 21 Peeky

 

Chris saying should have pretty much three characters. Uncle Henry, Aunt Em, and Dorothy. if in the background, you want to show another character or two, it can be the Manticore and Chip Chopper. We don't need a table and a Tribunal. scene should show expressions and appropriate body language of Uncle Henry, Aunt Em and Dorothy along with applicable facial expressions. They should be facing one another with or so that the body language and facial expressions of all three are apparent to go along with the matching text thank you. I hope this answers your question because you are moving along at a great pace and I do not want to slow you down.

 

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Peeky

 

 

Jul, 21 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

It's good that need to do only three characters for the scene "Appearance of Uncle Henry".

Please see the modified sketch. I made the stack higher and think no need to do that more so that it does not cover other details. Since you approved the sketch basically, I have already started working on a big pencil drawing.

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 21 Peeky

 

Please proceed with completing this scene

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

 

Jul, 23 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I made a pencil drawing of the scene "Pile of gizzards". I decided to make the Scarecrow a little scared so that to do the scene more interesting. It is attached. Hope you will like it.

In color, everything will look more detailed and bright.

 

Best regards.

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 24 Peeky

 

I do like the drawing and detail, but offer these suggestions. Please make the scarecrow's eyes larger and compare his face to earlier creations. Uncle Henry does not look like the uncle Henry that you created earlier and Dorothy looks like a different person as well as Tee's face.

Expect delays, out of the office, when responses are sent from my iPhone-

 

 

 

Jul, 24 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

 

Please see the attached drawing. I made the scarecrow's eyes larger and corrected the other faces. All the characters are smiling, so there are changes on their faces. I changed their eyebrows that showed surprise, which also changes the similarity. Also some improvements will be made in color. For example, Tee's face and hands will be darker. Hope everything is okay.

I am working on sketches to the other scenes.

 

Ruslan.

 

 

Jul, 24 Peeky

 

OK proceed, but please compare Uncle Henry and Dorothy's face. to other images... Scarecrow is fine.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

Jul, 26 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I received the payment to my guru account. Thank you.

Please see the attached 2 sketches. I have been looking for different variants.

I think that these compositions are the most acceptable.

"Appearance of Uncle Henry": such an arrangement of the figures is most optimal to show the interaction.

"Jumberello at night": I chose this scale to show both the characters and the landscape.

As to the drawing "Pile of gizzards".

I did some corrections and attached it. Also I attached the fragments to compare.

Dorothy is depicted in profile. I have not depicted her from the side before. The only thing I rolled off her sleeves. If necessary I can roll up them in color. Uncle Henry is laughing, so facial features are changed a little. In any case they will all be more recognizable in color picture.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jul, 28 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

Please see the attached color picture of Pile of gizzards scene. Hope you will like it.

What about the sketches to the other two scenes which I sent you on Jul, 25?

I need about a week to complete two more illustrations considering possible corrections.

I have to ask you something. Since one scene is completed and I made the sketches to other two,

I would like to submit common invoice for these three illustrations, because it takes a lot of time to transfer funds and because extra fees have grown to me it is not profitable to send small amounts.

In any case, I will complete these two scenes before the funds are credited to my bank account in Ukraine.

Hope for your understanding.

Thanks,

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 28 Peeky

 

Gizzard Scene...looks really good. I think if you take the fat out of Dorothy's cheek and make it look like a smile - you have a winner. Now she looks as though she was stung by a wasp.

Scene 2 - they do not have chairs. Jack as the pilot can have a high chair in the center of the Jumberello. Regarding his posturing, please review the earlier email. Jack was speaking to the others who could be sitting around cross legged on their bottoms (indian style). The manticore could be lounging and on his side and Jim should also be facing Jack on the other jumberello and perhaps lying on his side. The pilot can be sitting in the middle.

The jumberello float - they do not fly.

Too much void beneath the jumberello. They should be surrounded by jumberello of different size and color - kind of tossed - here and there with no pattern. Then where the heavens meet the horizon there should be stars and eventually a milky way over head.

I see this scene working as if someone is looking down on them just with a little elevation

 

Heavens.............................................................................................................................................................Stars and Milky

 

Viewer jumberello

Jumberello w passengers jumberello

 

Void air space and Jumberello of different size

Jumerello Void air space and Jumberello of different size

jumberello Void air space and Jumberello of different size Void air space and Jumberello of different size

Void air space and Jumberello of different size jumberello

 

Bottom of Gorge

 

Scene 3 - I made this bold to separate it from the prior scene

This scene should be emotion packed. Read the text that will appear in the image. Uncle Henry is shocked. I see where you partly show that on his face. But his body language needs to be dramatic. Perhaps his hand and arm is extended toward chip, manticore, sc. Perhaps he is looking more at Em as he says the text that appears in this scene

Aunt Em is the same. Would she shake hands with her only child after thinking she was dead and is now reuniting with her?

Perhaps Dorothy could have both hands extended and toto on the ground standing on two hind legs...this image should also have the characters that appear in the text of this image in the background. Chip could look surprised, SCrow amused...I will leave that to you. I may have been indifferent to including them before but now that i see this scene and see it as terribly stark, I am thinking that will help.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

Jul, 28 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

 

OK.

I will make these changes and send new sketches tomorrow,

and also will change Dorothy's face in the color picture, although I do not see any excess fat on her cheek... :)

Jumberello Scene. I wanted to show the dynamics of the movement of Jumberello,

so I placed them this way. Well, I will change their position.

 

Please answer my question regarding the common invoice for three scenes.

I would like to clarify that the funds will be transferred to my bank account in two weeks.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 28 Peeky

 

Good Job - you may bill for this. Can we at least get the sketches right on the other two before you bill for them? The other two are pretty far off. The jumberello float - like in your cover.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

Jul, 27 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Okay, I will send the sketches tomorrow.

Please see the attachment. I changed Dorothy's face. You should like it.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 28 Peeky

 

excellent. thx!

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

Jul, 28 Peeky

 

Also - when I pay you for an image you are to give it to me in three formats per our modified agreement

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

Jul, 28 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

Glad you liked the Pile of gizzards scene.

I made and attached new sketches.

The appearance of Uncle Henry.

What that you suggest on the scene "The appearance of Uncle Henry" requires a different composition and a more extended format. I think this shows not a shock, but an interaction of the characters.

For me, the integrity of the composition is important. To show such gestures need to depict the characters from the side.

Jumberello scene.

I placed the main elements to agree with you, and filled the space with Jumberello of different size, and then I'll draw the characters in two jumberello.

I would like to send an invoice for three illustrations (sketches, big drawings, color pictures) as we agreed, considering the discount for the big drawings.

Of course, I will send them as TIFFs, PDFs through Gmail. These files will be large.

Thanks,

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 28 Peeky

 

Scene 3 sketch_2.jpg The Henry Scene...much better thank you. I do need the following adjustments. This scene is taking place at an outdoor banquet which means there are more people. So can you please add a few more people scattered about them.

Uncle Henry - I do not care how you do it, but I want to show his face and body language. He could be on the other side of Em, with arm and hand extended toward SC, Chip, Manticore. Standing Sideways and looking at Em would give us a full facial of his emotion...his expression could be anger, frustration, amazement, mixed emotion believing that he ended up in hell.

Check out the expression of the image from which you crafted the character. That expression to me would almost work in this scene

 

Scene 2 sketch_3.jpg Jumberello

Russlan, I do not know what you have going on in your life right now, but I don't believe that you are giving my text descriptions any attention. please refer to the last description, and the one before it. In the last one I did a layout with text. in addition to the description. You can bill for Uncle Henry but not this one. Do you want to skip and try another scene?

 

 

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

Jul, 29 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I sent the invoice for all stages in two scenes.

Well, I'll change The Henry Scene. I will make this scene quickly.

I do not want to skip the Jumberello scene, I have already spent time on it. I sent you only the structure of the movement of Jumberello without the characters to find out the principal questions.

I carefully read your texts, but the texts and visualization are two different things.

There is a problem with your understanding of perspective in the plane of the sheet. Please place the objects on paper as you want to see that (rough scheme), not in text form and send the scanned image. Often, your texts come into conflict with the possibilities to realize ate the text on the plane of the sheet. Despite all the contradictions, I always strive to create a good composition as you know.

Do not worry, everything will be fine and I'm sure that the result will be excellent.

Thanks,

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 30 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I made a new sketch to "The Appearance of Uncle Henry" scene, although so the original concept has changed. I added people. I had to reduce them to do this. No need add people in the space between Dorothy and Uncle, this would interfere with the interaction between Uncle, Aunt and Dorothy.

I am waiting for your reply.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 30 Peeky

 

That is great! Proceed.

 

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Peeky

 

 

Jul, 30 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

Great. I'll be drawing the second scene.

I also made another sketch for the Jumberello scene. I stretched the format, increased the space and lowered the gorge. So far I have not depicted passengers. I will draw the characters when you approve the location of the objects. I am going to place them on two closest Jumberello.

Please pay the invoice, because the procedure of transfer funds takes a long time.

Do you want to get the PDF and TIFF of the first scene now or may I sent them later together with two other scenes?

Thanks,

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 31 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

 

I am working on big drawing for "The appearance of Uncle Henry" scene on the basis of the sketch that you approved. It will take in 1-2 days to complete it. I think that it is necessary to show the dramatic sky and it will match to the dramatic expression of Uncle Henry's face. Do you agree?

It would be nice if you pay the invoice until early Monday morning. In this case the funds will be credited to my cash account on the guru on Friday, August 4 and then to my bank account in Ukraine August 11.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

Jul, 31 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I am working on a big drawing "The appearance of Uncle Henry" and waiting for your reply regarding the sky.

I see the Guru.com sent you a payment reminder. Please pay the invoice.

Thanks.

Ruslan

 

 

 

Jul, 31 Peeky

 

I have been out and this is fine. Proceed. it will have text. I look forward to the final version. Also, I do not want any more character creations once approved as a sketch to be colored for an additional fee. Please leave as a sketch. I will see their coloring in the scene. $XXX is then what I will be paying unless I specify I want color.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky

 

 

Jul, 31 Peeky

 

As a reminder...cant tell by the sketch but you are to show them appearing and part of them will be ghostly or translucent...

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky