Sep, 1 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,
What do you mean: what text and what image?
If it is regarding the Proclamation scene, I certainly read the text.
However, I create the image so that to keep the integrity of the composition and any additions need to be done so that to maintain a balance. In addition, I did everything on the basis of the drawing that you approved. Please see the attached images before and after.
I added billowing clouds and fog, made the letters more sparkling, some of them fade into nothing and some are translucent and smaller. If to add more clouds and fog the scene will be oversaturated with details and this is bad for the Wizard image because it is the compositional and semantic center of this illustration.

Regarding the Jack Music scene, I made all the changes and additions except Dorothy's raised hand, because this is bad for this composition, I already wrote about it.

Hope for your understanding.
Thanks,
Ruslan

 

 

 

Sep, 1 Peeky

 

Here is the text for Uncle Henry Scene

“do you see any angels, Em? I don’t.”
“Look,” he said with a gentle shake and once she did, he continued. “I see a man’s head stuck on a robot, a hungry Manticore waiting to eat us, and a walking hay-bale ready to feed a poor dumb two-tone cow. Welcome to hell, Em!” and to us he said loudly, “where the devil is her accordion[jS1] ?”
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[jS1]delightful payoff


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Peeky

 

 

Sep, 1 Peeky

 

Great Job - the changes look good. One more change. Can you please bold the text. Looking at the two images side by side, the text in the former stands out much better.  All else is well.


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Peeky

 

 

Sep, 1 Ruslan Vigovsky

 

Peeky,

I added a text into the Appearance of Uncle scene. Please see two versions. Since there is a lot of text, I removed the author's words in one version. This is better and more logical, because the text is next to the Uncle and it is clear that these are his words.

Glad you liked the Proclamation scene. I made the text more bright. The scene is attached.

If all is well with a sketch to Jack scene, I will start on the drawing.

In the meantime, you can send information to the next scene.

Thanks,
Ruslan

 

 

 

 

Sep, 2 Peeky

 

Thanks Ruslan, these look really good. Favor please - I need a change to the text in the Henry scene please change it to:

"Do you see any Angels, Em? I don't!  Look Em! I see a man's head stuck on  a robot,  an angry metal-lion-bird, and a talking hay-bale.  Welcome to Hell, Em...welcome to Hell.  And where the hell is her harp!"

Thank you.


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Peeky