Peeky

 

Do the two scenes keeping in mind my objectives as well as you can.

 

The scenes created thus far were directed by me and have the characters as I desired them - so that art is likely more reflective of my tastes than not.  Also, I envisioned the art as being desirable for younger aged persons as well because the book can be enjoyed by middle grade up.

 

So proceed. I will not interfere. I do want things to look realistic though - Dorothy did not look realistic - her pose appeared artificial because in the story she was not unconscious as she mounted  the lion.  Perhaps, you could make her look exhausted....

 

I could not tell the plant was eating the baby without really studying it and  in the  story the baby was hanging there as a husk - the plants do not eat people they drain their life force and fluids.

 

In any event - proceed.  I have made many a mistake in life - the current direction of my art could surely be one.

 

Peeky