Aug, 21 Peeky

 

It looks great Ryan!  One thing I do require, but I am confident it will not challenge your skills or stress you. Dorothy's face...please make her look like Dorothy...She looks like a black woman. Other than that "wow"!  Thank you!

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

Peeky

 

 

Aug, 21 OnDrawnWings

 

Good,

OK, I'll be careful with the face.

I think, to nail down her face and process, I would like to go ahead and go all the way to final on just this one for now.

If that passes, then we can move forward on the rest.

'Glad we can finish these together,
~Ryan

 

 

Aug, 21 OnDrawnWings

 

Also, Peeky,

Do you have an interior book designer?

As in, someone who does the layout and design, putting all the art pieces alongside the text?

Lately, I've been hired to do that each time I've illustrated. Assuming you enjoy the work and the process of working with me down the road, I'd like to throw my hat in the ring to put all this work together.

Anyways, just a thought for the future. Page and cover design samples attached.

~R

 

 

Aug, 21 Peeky

 

OK, but I am sure you can see the difference. Do you need an image of Dorothy's Waze?

Expect delays, out of the office,  when responses are sent from my iPhone-

 

 

Aug, 21 Peeky

 

Thank you, I will check it out

 

Aug, 21 OnDrawnWings

 

I have all the art that you've shown me printed and next to me as I work.

I'll do my best to capture her face as per matching what's there yet in my style. That's the trick.

Does she need the lipstick smear in this scene? Please make sure that you note any important details that I might miss from this point on. Costuming-wise, she is wearing Jim's shirt and has the magenta dress type outfit.

What do you reckon her exact age is, per your novels?

~R

 

 

Aug, 21 Peeky

She does not need The lipstick smears and age 15 to 16. As far as an important detail, you have her passed out where as in the book she is not. I can think over no other important distinctions.

Expect delays, out of the office,  when responses are sent from my iPhone-

 

 

Aug, 21 OnDrawnWings

 

No, she's grinning and her eyes are only half-shut. It's probably hard to see at the moment.

The effects of the plant mist made them woozy and euphoric, I thought.

~R

 

Aug, 22 Peeky

 

OK, I could not see that...she grins and looks woozy like a black girl...

 

Thank you for the opportunity to be of service!

 

Peeky